Showing posts with label movies. Show all posts
Showing posts with label movies. Show all posts

Tuesday, November 8, 2011

Your Screenplay, Your Location is King

The Movie Saw
    Your Screenplay, The Location is King




    The one thing that will determine the budget of your script more than almost
anything else is location.  It is not so much the location that you chose it is
moving from one location to another.
    Every time that your story changes locations you will have to move cast
and crew.  You will have to also set up again and then there could be electrical
concerns.  There could be new permits that have to be gotten.  How long will you
have access to the new location?  How to feed the cast and crew there?  When you
move locations you are moving everything.
    In the ultra low budget world if you have more than ten locations you are
no longer shooting a low budget movie.  Unless you own or have unrestricted
access to all the locations.  This is why so many low budget movies are in the
woods movies or on the road movies.  These locations are free.
    I am not telling you to set your script in a closet and it will only cost ten bucks
to make.  I am saying that you need to know your locations before you write.
    Saw has a central location, half the movie is spent there and this really saved
the producers a lot of money and surely cut down on the shooting schedule.    The movie
Saw is a good example.  You can have that central location.  Your main characters
spend most of their time there.  Most of the story is told there, but for the sake
of making it more cinematic the script takes us on short trips to other locations.
    Let’s look at easy to find locations.
From The Movie The Devil




    An apartment or a house.  A good sized house is better than an
apartment because it can double for multi locations while at the
same time not requiring the production to pick up stakes and
set up across town.  One bedroom could be in character’s A
house, while another could appear to belong to character B who
could live in another state or even country.  The kitchen
becomes a location, the living room, the basement, the
backyard and the garage if there is one.
    A car and or cars can become separate locations.  Whole movies have
been shot inside of cars.  The last half an hour of the Stephen King Film Cujo
is shot in and around a car. The great budget saving feature here is that the
car does not even have to be working.  It is better if it does not.  The production
saves on having to travel with the vehicle and spending money on gas.
    When you write a script do not let this be the first thing in your head.  The
story comes first, but when you re-write it consider location and budget.
    Parks and wooded area are great to save on money.  Parking garages are
cool too.
    Locations where there is just enough room for conflict, while the tightness
of the space also adds to the conflict are great as well.  The movie The Devil is
a good example, mostly shot in an elevator.  Even if you have to build the
elevator set this is okay.  It does not cost that much to build four walls and a ceiling
that can be moved depending upon the shot.
    About special effects, do not be afraid to include them.  Effects are
cheaper and easier to pull off with the available software today.  I am
not saying that you are free to write the Matrix or Inception, but write the
story and later decide where you may have to cut or alter.
    If you remind yourself that location is important then you will have less
trouble down the road with your script.  It will be far more appealing to a low
budget producer if they can tell early on that you understand the basic facts
of the business.
    This also applies to television movies as well.  Most of them have limited
locations and limited set up’s.  Look at the movies that Hallmark Channel and Lifetime
makes.  Most of these movies are limited locations and limited shooting time.  These
made for television movies are usually shot in eighteen - thirty days.  A low budget
film shoot could be and usually will be between five and twenty one days.
    Knowing the value of locations will help you create a script that will be
more attractive to producers and much more budget friendly if you decide to shoot
it yourself

Thursday, October 27, 2011

Your Screenplay is a Circle

        Your Screenplay is a Circle


    You are having problems with your screenplay.  You know how it begins,
but the middle and the end have you at a loss.  I can tell you this much.  The
place that you start should be the place where you finish.
    A good script is a perfect circle and allow me to explain how and why.
    You story will most like begin with your characters living in their idea
world.  A perfectly calm existence is shattered and it is a never ending scramble to return to that perfect life.
    Sounds crazy?
    Remember the Godfather?
    The opening scenes?
    The family is happy and intact.  They are celebrating a wedding.  The
Godfather and is inner circle are in total control of a world that is going to be
attacked from both outside and within.  This world is destroyed.  The Godfather
is shot. Sonny, his oldest son is killed, his enforcer is killed and his youngest
son Michael is beaten.  From this point on there is a never ending quest by those
left standing to put their universe back into its proper order.
    The last scene of the film, after all the violence and bloodshed, is Michael
in his father’s place as Godfather conducting business as his father did when the
film began.  All is right with the world.  The natural order has been restored.
    You can look at a saga like Lord of The Rings and the same holds true.  Where
does that story begin?  Home, comfortable and safe.  After an endless quest
where does it end up.  Frodo and Sam back to where they started.  Missing
a finger here and a lot of bruises there they are back to the perfect world
that they had to flee.
    Some stories begin with that perfect world already shattered and through
flashbacks it is revealed through out the story.  The character is forever trying to
find away to or back to their idea world.  Some characters do not realize that their
world was great until they venture outside of their comfort zone and after having
all of their illusions shattered to they really appreciate what they had going for them.
A great example of this is in the minor UK classic Mona Lisa starring Bob Hoskins.
    Your characters do not travel along an arc if the story is going to be
great and memorable, they travel along a circle.  That circle traveled in the Wizard
of Oz.   Dorothy has to leave home to realize that there is no place like home.
    Send your characters on grand adventures, but always keep the end zone
in sight.  The place that they are headed looks a great deal like the place that they
have just left behind.    I am not suggesting that it should be a steady walk
toward the place that they just left.  Put obstacles in their way.
See if they can jump through an endless series of hoops, but at the
end of it all if they have proven themselves worthy let them come home.
They do not need a hero’s welcome, but they need to return to
the world where they feel most welcome.  There is a line in one of the greatest
of all westerns, Ride the High Country, where the lead say that all he wants at the
end of the day is to come home Justified.  He wants to go off into the world, do
what his code of honor will allow him to do and come back home knowing
that he could not have done things any other way.
    Look at Michael in the Godfather or Sam in the Lord of the Rings Trilogy both
of these characters did things their way.  Always guided by their own personal
code and in the end they make it back to a world where they belong.
    The greatest stories ever told are not straight lines.
    They are not rocky hills and valleys, but as Scarlett traveled in
Gone With the Wind, they are a full circle and the fuller the better.

Sunday, October 23, 2011

The Ultra Low Budget Script

            The Ultra Low Budget Script

            Your Screenplay, Time to Write It

    1.
    As someone who has written a few of these things my advice for
the beginner is just to get it down on paper.  Beginning, middle and end
as fast as you possibly can for this reason, gravity will take over other
wise.  What I mean by Gravity is the pull of the other (dreaded better)
idea.  The story that you are trying to write will not seem nearly
as fresh or as interesting as the one you have just come up with.
Gravity is the weight of everyday life.  The normal doubts
about whether or not you can do this thing.  After all who do you
think that you are trying to write a screenplay.
    Other people write movies, but not me.
    They are so long and so complicated.
    These are the myths that will weight down.
    Allow me to kill these two myths.
    First screenplays are not that long.  90 pages and less than
20,000 words on average.
    What?
    90 pages sounds like a lot.
    Unless you are writing a silent movie over half of these pages will
be dialogue.  That is a lot of white space.
    I don’t know the format.
    Really?
    Really, I do not know the format.
    Fine, go online.  Google your favorite movie, search for the
script and read it.  It will not take long to read.  A good script is a
quick read.  The cool thing about doing this you will read where there
were changes made that are not even amongst the deleted dvd scenes.
Also the software that you pick may help you with the formatting. Last
bit of advice on this subject and it is the best writing advice I ever
got.  Get a notebook and a pen.  Sit down and hand copy 3 pages
of the favorite screenplay that you have read.  By doing this simple
exercise you will learn so many subtle details you missed by just
reading it.
    Secondly, it is not complicated.  Bad scripts are complicated.
Good ones are so simple that you wonder why there are not more
good movies.
    My girlfriend loves the Notebook.  As a guy it makes me
cringe.  As a writer it makes me smile.  On the surface it looks complicated.
Only because it bounces back and forth along the time-line to keep
you guessing.  The truth is that it is just a boy meets girl story.  Boy loses
girl, boy gets girl back, boy loses girl to illness and each day boy gets
girl back again.  Wow, that is so complicated.
    Need more examples?
    Fine.
    Lunatic tortures people to make them appreciate their lives more, Saw.
    Young couple falls in love on doomed ocean cruise, Titanic.
    Brain dead couple make all the wrong choices when dealing with a violent
supernatural entity, Paranormal Activity.
    Get the picture?
    Not that complicated at all.
    But my idea has twists and turns and surprises and is filled with deep
symbolic elements.
    Good grief who let M. Night in here?  Who told mister Happening,
mister The Village where we would be having our little chat?
    Fine, okay, I can deal with this.
    A group of strangers discover that they are trapped in an elevator with
the devil, The Devil.  Story by our good friend M. Night.
    Cut this nonsense out and make an entertain movie or all the studios
will stop answer your calls is a great motivator huh?
     Now you need software.
    Final draft is the best.  It cost a good amount.
    There is also Movie Magic screenwriter and Script Wizard.
    You could go for a free program.  There are 3 that I like.
    Scripped is a site where you write and save your screenplay at their
online site. You can even register it there.
    Celtx is a nice little free formatting software.  It also will help you
with the full production of your movie, but that is another article.
     I really like a freeware program called Roughdraft, it is bare bones
basic, but if you already know the elements of screen writing then it is a
solid program.
    Good luck with your screenplay and remember if you write just
3 pages a day for one month you have a screenplay.